Stranger Journal # 1

The first one, labeled part one, is much more fluid and wordy. Unlike the passage labeled just "1", part one feels more human and uses a style of writing similar to my own. 1 is very choppy, with short sentences void of any emotions. 1 also employs french words and uses a more direct translation of the original text. Part one may usemore formal word choice, but the style feels more realistic than the short sloppy feel of the 1 translation.